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I Never left the halls of the lonely.
I was always there in that place
the noise of my voice was lost,
lost in that lonely space,

Sometimes that's just how you end up feeling,
you know where you are but you feel overwhelmed,
just surrounded by the sound of your own voice,
wishing that someone would walk bye and hear the noise,

Then I started to sing made up songs,
wordless winding and skat that moved,
I was all lonely and listening to my own voice,
just neverendingly sending out tunes,

Then a different song came back,
not mine but an accompaniment that matched,
so I sung a little more to fill in the space,
and an echo came back with a pretty face,

She sang to me and I gave her my reply,
I felt at home in her soft brown eyes,
She'd been singing and waiting just like me
I found her there in the halls of the lonely.
©2007-2009 ~Furnosaurus
:iconfurnosaurus:

Author's Comments

written for a girl... and written to start writing again....
it feels good to get back into the swing of putting down words.... (I was doing mix and matchy stuff with the rhyme scheme and fear that it's a bit hard to read like that but... it gets the message across I think)

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:iconblackenvy:
It's a nice message :aww: Sad but uplifting at the same time :)

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A heart at the end of its' tether
Swiftly descending into blame,
Pain lasts only a minute,
Resounds through generations forever;
The aftermath, it spells my name.
:icondgenreteliterabbit:
good go lad.

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RUN, rabbit, run
dig that hole, forget the sun
and when at last the work is done
don't sit down, time to dig another one

steps taken forward
and sleepwalking back again...
encumbered forever by desire and ambition
:iconfurnosaurus:
thanks I was kinda going for that melancholy ground.. sounds like I was in the right place

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Good taimes...
:iconfurnosaurus:
no quite sure what you mean?/

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Good taimes...
:icondgenreteliterabbit:
mean i like the bloody thing man. i'm sorry i can't be any more eloquent right now.

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RUN, rabbit, run
dig that hole, forget the sun
and when at last the work is done
don't sit down, time to dig another one

steps taken forward
and sleepwalking back again...
encumbered forever by desire and ambition
:iconfurnosaurus:
oh

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Good taimes...
:iconparadoxvision7:
I love it man !!! Great imagery !!!! It is so profound how lonely we feel, but how alone we are not.

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I have come to the conclusion, the solution to the confusion is behind the ILLUSION.
:iconfurnosaurus:
thankyou very much... that was the kinda feel I was going after so.. I'm glad it came through correctly

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Good taimes...

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